Stave 1The narrator
Marley was dead: to begin with.
The very first sentence of the story.
- In plain words
- Marley was dead, to start with.
- What it shows
- The story opens bluntly with a death, and the narrator insists on it, because Marley’s ghost will soon appear. The chatty, direct voice is like a storyteller reading aloud by the fire.
Themes Death · The supernatural
Stave 1The narrator
Oh! But he was a tight-fisted hand at the grind-stone, Scrooge! a squeezing, wrenching, grasping, scraping, clutching, covetous, old sinner!
The narrator introduces the main character.
- In plain words
- He was a mean, money-grabbing old sinner.
- What it shows
- The list of harsh “-ing” words piles up like Scrooge grabbing at money. “Tight-fisted” means mean with money, and “sinner” adds a religious weight: greed is shown as a sin from the very start.
Themes Greed and money · Isolation
Techniques Listing · Metaphor · Alliteration
Stave 1The narrator
Hard and sharp as flint, from which no steel had ever struck out generous fire; secret, and self-contained, and solitary as an oyster.
The narrator introduces the main character.
- In plain words
- He was as hard as a stone that never gives off a spark, and as closed off and lonely as an oyster.
- What it shows
- Flint only gives off sparks when struck: nobody has ever drawn warmth or generosity out of Scrooge. An oyster is shut tight, but may hold a pearl, a hint that there is good in Scrooge waiting to be found. The hissing “s” sounds make him sound cold and secretive.
Themes Isolation · Greed and money · Cold and warmth
Techniques Simile · Metaphor · Alliteration · Listing
Stave 1The narrator
The cold within him froze his old features, nipped his pointed nose, shrivelled his cheek, stiffened his gait;
The narrator describes the main character.
- In plain words
- The coldness inside him showed on his face and in the stiff way he walked.
- What it shows
- His coldness is inside him, and it shows on the outside. The list of harsh verbs makes his unkindness physical, part of his body.
Themes Cold and warmth · Isolation
Techniques Listing · Personification · Metaphor
Stave 1The narrator
But what did Scrooge care! It was the very thing he liked. To edge his way along the crowded paths of life, warning all human sympathy to keep its distance,
The narrator describes how people react to the main character in the street.
- In plain words
- He did not care at all. He liked pushing through life keeping other people’s kindness away.
- What it shows
- Scrooge chooses to be alone. The image of him edging through crowds while keeping sympathy at a distance shows that his isolation is his own choice, which makes his change later more striking.
Themes Isolation
Techniques Metaphor · Personification
Stave 1Scrooge
“Bah!” said Scrooge, “Humbug!”
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, answering a cheerful Christmas greeting.
- In plain words
- Nonsense! Rubbish!
- What it shows
- His famous reply dismisses Christmas as a fraud. The short, harsh words are his answer to warmth and good wishes, and they become his catchphrase.
Themes The spirit of Christmas · Isolation
Stave 1Fred
Christmas a humbug, uncle!
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, as an argument about Christmas begins.
- In plain words
- You call Christmas nonsense, Uncle?
- What it shows
- Fred’s shocked, cheerful reply shows his warmth. Calling Scrooge “uncle” reminds him of the family he ignores.
Themes The spirit of Christmas · Family
Stave 1Fred
What right have you to be dismal? What reason have you to be morose? You’re rich enough.
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, a family argument about Christmas.
- In plain words
- Why should you be gloomy? You have plenty of money.
- What it shows
- Fred turns Scrooge’s complaint about him being poor back on him. Fred is poor but happy, Scrooge is rich but miserable, which shows that money does not bring happiness.
Themes Greed and money · The spirit of Christmas
Techniques Rhetorical question · Repetition
Stave 1Scrooge
What’s Christmas time to you but a time for paying bills without money;
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, a family argument about Christmas.
- In plain words
- What is Christmas to you except a time for having bills you cannot pay?
- What it shows
- Scrooge sees Christmas only in terms of money and debt. The question is meant to mock Fred for being poor.
Themes The spirit of Christmas · Greed and money · Poverty and social responsibility
Techniques Rhetorical question · Repetition
Stave 1Scrooge
every idiot who goes about with ‘Merry Christmas’ on his lips, should be boiled with his own pudding, and buried with a stake of holly through his heart.
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, a family argument about Christmas.
- In plain words
- Anyone who says “Merry Christmas” should be boiled in their own pudding and buried with holly through their heart.
- What it shows
- The violent, comic exaggeration shows how much Scrooge hates Christmas cheer. A stake through the heart is how folk tales destroy vampires, so he treats cheerful people like monsters. It is so over the top that it is funny.
Themes The spirit of Christmas · Isolation
Techniques Hyperbole
Stave 1Fred
a kind, forgiving, charitable, pleasant time: the only time I know of, in the long calendar of the year, when men and women seem by one consent to open their shut-up hearts freely,
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, a family argument about Christmas.
- In plain words
- Christmas is a kind, forgiving, generous time, the one time of year when everyone opens up their hearts.
- What it shows
- Fred sets out what Christmas means to Dickens: a time of kindness, when people open hearts that are usually shut. His list of gentle words is the opposite of the harsh list used for Scrooge.
Themes The spirit of Christmas · Poverty and social responsibility
Techniques Listing · Metaphor
Stave 1Fred
and to think of people below them as if they really were fellow-passengers to the grave, and not another race of creatures bound on other journeys.
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, a family argument about Christmas.
- In plain words
- And to think of poorer people as fellow travellers on the same journey to death, not a different kind of creature.
- What it shows
- Fred says rich and poor share the same journey through life to death, so they should treat each other as equals. This is the heart of Dickens’s message about social responsibility.
Themes Poverty and social responsibility · The spirit of Christmas · Death
Techniques Metaphor · Antithesis
Stave 1Scrooge
Are there no prisons?
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, as two visitors ask for money for the poor.
- In plain words
- Aren’t there prisons to deal with the poor?
- What it shows
- Scrooge suggests the poor belong in prisons and workhouses, not in anyone’s care. The cold question shows his cruelty, and in Stave 3 the Ghost of Christmas Present throws these words back at him.
Themes Poverty and social responsibility · Greed and money
Techniques Rhetorical question
Stave 1Scrooge
“If they would rather die,” said Scrooge, “they had better do it, and decrease the surplus population.”
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, on hearing that many poor people would rather die than go to the workhouse.
- In plain words
- If they would rather die, they should get on with it, and reduce the number of spare people.
- What it shows
- Scrooge echoes the ideas of the economist Thomas Malthus, who argued that population would outgrow the food supply. Dickens makes the view sound heartless, and the Ghost of Christmas Present uses these words against Scrooge when he asks about Tiny Tim.
Themes Poverty and social responsibility · Greed and money · Death
Stave 1Scrooge
It’s enough for a man to understand his own business, and not to interfere with other people’s.
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, refusing to give to the poor.
- In plain words
- A man should mind his own business and not get involved in other people’s.
- What it shows
- Scrooge believes he owes nothing to anyone else. Marley’s Ghost answers this directly later in the stave: “Mankind was my business.”
Themes Poverty and social responsibility · Isolation · Greed and money
Stave 1Scrooge
a poor excuse for picking a man’s pocket every twenty-fifth of December!
The end of the working day on Christmas Eve, talking about a clerk’s day off tomorrow.
- In plain words
- Christmas is just an excuse to rob employers once a year.
- What it shows
- Scrooge sees paying his clerk for a day off as being robbed. He treats Christmas only as a cost to his business.
Themes Greed and money · The spirit of Christmas
Techniques Metaphor
Stave 1The narrator
Darkness is cheap, and Scrooge liked it.
Christmas Eve, going up the dark stairs at home.
- In plain words
- Darkness costs nothing, and Scrooge liked that.
- What it shows
- Scrooge likes darkness because it costs nothing. The short sentence links his meanness with darkness, while light and warmth are linked with kindness throughout the story.
Themes Greed and money · Light and darkness · Isolation
Techniques Symbolism
Stave 1The narrator
cash-boxes, keys, padlocks, ledgers, deeds, and heavy purses wrought in steel.
Christmas Eve at night, describing what a ghost’s chain is made of.
- In plain words
- Money boxes, keys, padlocks, account books, legal papers and heavy purses made of steel.
- What it shows
- The chain is made of the tools of money-making. The list shows that the things Marley valued in life are now the things that weigh him down.
Themes Greed and money · The supernatural
Techniques Listing · Symbolism
Stave 1Marley’s Ghost
I wear the chain I forged in life,
Christmas Eve at night, a visitor explains the chain it wears.
- In plain words
- I wear the chain I made while I was alive.
- What it shows
- Marley made his own chain through his choices. “Forged” suggests a blacksmith’s hard work: every selfish act added a link. It warns Scrooge that his own chain is growing.
Themes Greed and money · The supernatural · Redemption and change
Techniques Metaphor · Symbolism
Stave 1Marley’s Ghost
I made it link by link, and yard by yard; I girded it on of my own free will, and of my own free will I wore it.
Christmas Eve at night, a visitor explains the chain it wears.
- In plain words
- I made it bit by bit, and I chose to put it on and wear it.
- What it shows
- The repetition stresses that Marley chose this. Because his suffering came from free choices, Scrooge can still choose differently.
Themes Greed and money · Redemption and change
Techniques Repetition · Metaphor
Stave 1Marley’s Ghost
Mankind was my business. The common welfare was my business; charity, mercy, forbearance, and benevolence, were, all, my business.
Christmas Eve at night, a ghost answers the praise “a good man of business”.
- In plain words
- Other people were what I should have cared about: their welfare, and showing charity, mercy, patience and kindness.
- What it shows
- Marley takes Scrooge’s word “business” and gives it a new meaning: our real business is caring for others. The repetition hammers home Dickens’s message about social responsibility.
Themes Poverty and social responsibility · Redemption and change · The spirit of Christmas · Greed and money
Techniques Repetition · Listing
Stave 1Scrooge
You may be an undigested bit of beef, a blot of mustard, a crumb of cheese, a fragment of an underdone potato.
Christmas Eve at night, refusing to believe in a ghost.
- In plain words
- You might just be caused by indigestion: some beef, mustard, cheese or potato I ate.
- What it shows
- Scrooge tries to explain the ghost away as an upset stomach. The comic list shows him clinging to what is rational, and the joke hides how frightened he is.
Themes The supernatural
Techniques Listing · Alliteration
Stave 1Marley’s Ghost
no space of regret can make amends for one life’s opportunity misused!
Christmas Eve at night, a ghost explains why it suffers.
- In plain words
- However long you regret it, nothing can make up for wasting your life.
- What it shows
- Regret after death is too late to put things right. It is a warning that Scrooge must change now, while he still can.
Themes Redemption and change · Past, present and future
Editions differ: Dickens later changed “opportunity” to “opportunities”, and some editions follow the later text.
Stave 1Marley’s Ghost
I am here to-night to warn you, that you have yet a chance and hope of escaping my fate.
Christmas Eve at night, a ghost explains why it has come.
- In plain words
- I have come tonight to warn you that you still have a chance to avoid my fate.
- What it shows
- This is the key moment of Stave 1: Scrooge can still be saved. It presents the coming visits of the three spirits as a chance of redemption, not a punishment.
Themes Redemption and change · The supernatural
Stave 1The narrator
The misery with them all was, clearly, that they sought to interfere, for good, in human matters, and had lost the power for ever.
Christmas Eve at night, looking out of the window at many restless ghosts.
- In plain words
- They suffered because they wanted to help people, and could no longer do it.
- What it shows
- The ghosts suffer because they want to do good now, when it is too late. It shows Scrooge that the time to help others is while you are alive.
Themes Redemption and change · Poverty and social responsibility · The supernatural · Past, present and future
Stave 1Scrooge
I wish to be left alone,
The counting-house on Christmas Eve, asked what to put down as a gift for the poor.
- In plain words
- I want people to leave me alone.
- What it shows
- His answer to the charity collectors sums up his isolation: he chooses to be cut off from other people and from their needs. By the end of the story he is welcomed into his nephew’s home, the opposite of this wish.
Themes Isolation · Poverty and social responsibility